narrative writing

For writing this week we have been writing a narrative. We have  been writing  it in a pair.  Or story is about  a spooky  House on Maple Street.  This is  paragraph one.

One Friday on the 30th of October Mr and Mrs Smith moved into the 13th house on Maple Street in Froze Valley. They were both unaware there was a curse on the house and each Halloween night at 12 o'clock, whoever lived in that house turned into green goblin's. The whole town were terrified of that house!