Character Description

These past two weeks we have been Doing writing a character description about someone we know well.  I am doing my dad because he is really fun, exciting and nice and he is a handyman around the house. You can read some of my first Draft, hope you like it.

Draft 1

When I get home from school and walk in the lounge  I see dad in the lounge  in his 4Site Builders dirty work close sitting in his favorite spot on the coach.  He has beer in one hand (Xport 33) and the ipad in the other with the T.V. On watching movies and playing clash of clans. My dad is happy as.  He takes a sip  of his Xport 33.

For a living my dad is a builder.  Which means that he is  very helpful around the house .Which is good because we need a handyman  to fix stuff up.  Normally  after work he comes home and stells the  remote.  So we have to  watch his  program which is Gold rush or rugby  (normally).on tuesday and thursday  dad has rugby training which  is good because we can watch  what we  what to  watch. so i am  yous to it. When I or karly have a friend over  we have to book in a time to watch T.V so when we watch  T.V dad will go to  his room and watch what he wants to.